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KaylaMason

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Look....

    This may seem a little bit redundant because of the previous reviews, but frankly I have the same thing to say: it needs to flow more. The flow could be ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Lonely

    Hi. I really like this poem. Just for the sake of reviewing, I will say that the rhythm isn't completely fluid in the last three lines, as it is the ...

    Aug 3, 2010


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