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Re: I Look....
This may seem a little bit redundant because of the previous reviews, but frankly I have the same thing to say: it needs to flow more. The flow could be ...
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Re: Lonely
Hi. I really like this poem. Just for the sake of reviewing, I will say that the rhythm isn't completely fluid in the last three lines, as it is the ...
Aug 3, 2010
