Kayde2

Thanks everyone! I am glad you liked it. I was trying to focus a lot on the imagery I used in this poem. Imagery [in my opinion] is the most ...

First of all the italicized words in the beginning were intentional. They were supposed to be stressing the idea of Ethan being fake, without directly saying that he was. Also, ...

I found this to be very clever. After reading the title I thought it was going to be a poem about babies, but it wasn't. I liked the parallel! Well ...

Thanks for the reviews/compliments everyone! I was nervous to post this because I just wrote it randomly one day while sitting in class and did not think it was very ...

Thank you for rewiewing my peom. I will take your suggestions into consideration :) -Kayde

I really enjoyed reading this. It was sad, but I liked how you said in the spoiler that it is how your soul feels. I frequently write things that show ...