Katriona

I know it's been ages since you posted this, but... I believe I know what the answer is. But first, the review. Wow... I believe I have read this three, ...

Ah, yes... I think I see what you mean. It was kind of written... For someone I know, who doesn't see the spiritual war approaching. I'll see what I can ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you for the review, MillarS!

Ah, yes, you're right! I'll fix that. Thank you so much for the review!

I edited so it would be shorter.

I edited, just so everyone knows.

For anybody who is interested, part two of chapter two can be found at this topic.

7. I don't understand this part: rounding on him, and his rising to an agitated peak. Sorry, that was supposed to say his voice rising to an agitated peak. Again, ...

Hello! Part one of Chapter two is available at this link if you are interested.

Description of the characters will come later. Up 'till now it is kind of a secret.

Thank you everyone for taking the time to review my story. I will definitely try to work on everything you mentioned. Just to clarify, Asxz, this is why Raphael did ...

Great story! I'm not very good at helpful criticism, but I'll do my best. This time the answer didn't go unanswered Did you mean to say question ? It may ...