KatnissEverdeen

This is very captivating. The line about the 'Five simple mistakes' really grabbed me and I just had to keep reading. I couldn't find any grammatical or spelling errors. Everything ...

Wow, just, wow. This is amazing. It's a little disturbing. The Ebon Witch actually scares me a little! I want to know what's so odd about this baby. I just ...

An odd concept for a story, but a good one. Something interesting that hasn't been done before. I like how you used italics to separate the monster (?) and the ...

The opening line was epic. Loved it. It really grabs attention, which is exactly what you need. I was very sad by the end of it. Poor Iris! Losing her ...

Hi again! How are you? Good? That's good! Now onto the review! I loved how you gave reasons for why things were happening, why people were a certain way, why ...

I like the idea of your story. And the mystery of it! Most people have a problem with someone diving right in and not giving any explanation but I love ...

Okay, first off, this is a great story. I liked how the first two parts, the battle between light and dark and the birth were written in a certain style ...

This is a really good piece. I like how you've managed to keep everything still shrouded in mystery while giving us enough information to be scared for Abby. You've given ...

YES! SUPERNATURAL FANFIC! First off, Have a cookie for loving Supernatural *Hands you a cookie*. Second, Have a cookie for writing a good story *Another cookie* Third, Have another cookie ...

I have to say, at the end of Mockingjay, I hated Gale. Not only did he possibly kill Prim, but he just ups and leaves. But this has changed my ...

This whole chapter has a lot of mystery and I think it is perfect. I honestly cannot find anything wrong with the grammar or spelling. Which is something to be ...

I just have to say... Wow. I mean it. This was great. It was mysterious so that we didn't know exactly what was happening but we knew enough to be ...

I'm not very good at long detailed reviews but I'm give it my best shot. I throughly enjoyed the chapter. I adore the otherworldly-ness of the whole thing and the ...

I quite liked this. It has a sense of mystery about it that draws people in. The first paragraph is enough to get people interested enough to want to read ...

I'm not really one to point out errors, because everyone is human and everyone makes mistakes. I thought that it was a very interesting piece. I've read hundreds of stories ...