Kathy_7_Kathy

very nice... I may not be a genious in literature, but i thouught it was really very good... An advice: explain more, we have 5 senses, use them, describe, explain... ...

I liked it very much!!! 8) I'ts very pretty!!! :D And it is verry intresting!!! :D

This was very beautiful... I liked it very much it is wonderfull !!!!!!! this is a good poem, a really good one... you sould go n writing poems, you really ...

I like this very much! specially the end!! You should make it longer you should talk about them, what they do, what thwy see, what they feel, that would be ...

I actually think you sould make it rime, that would be a bit nicer but it is nice, I admit, The last paragraph is veryvery nice, but if there was ...