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Re: Untitled (suggestions and constructuve critisism welcome)
A great story idea! But I have some things to point out: 1. The grammar. It's not horrible, but it needs to be worked on. 2. Th construction of sentences. ...
Dec 25, 2015
A great story idea! But I have some things to point out: 1. The grammar. It's not horrible, but it needs to be worked on. 2. Th construction of sentences. ...
Dec 25, 2015
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