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First thing about this. Be a little more..... Literate. Thank you for your time, Darling, have a nice day.
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Burden
This poem is bittersweet. Very straight forward, slightly confusing, but easily fixed. I enjoyed it. Flowed very well, good grammar and vocabulary. I liked it, keep up the good work
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: If I Were a Bumblebee
Short. Simple. Sweet. And fun(: Very playful. Keep it up.
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: "Keys in Broken Locks"
Hello, I'm Kasidie Clyde. The depth and truth in this poem, has touched me with sincerity, you are very talented. I can't wait to read more of your writing. -Kasidie
Jan 7, 2011