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Re: The Saiyan and the Avatar
*I know this is supposed to add emphasis, but it would be better if you simply italicized. So it would be "Guys!"* Would it be okay to say "GUUUUYS!!!" if ...
Jan 26, 2015 -
Re: The Saiyan and the Avatar
I usually write the name of the character who's about to talk before the quote. I didn't know I needed to. Also, I see a lot of places where people ...
Jan 26, 2015 -
Re: The Perfect Baby Doll Chapter 1
Nice first chapter. I would like to have read a sentence or two about Dr. Wiggins' physical reactions and her emotions after these two parts: "Here Corinne paused and glanced ...
Jan 11, 2015