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Re: Character Profiles: Layla (draft)
Hello. Kanome here (Attempting to review this...) I love your character in general, but I want to be hooked. - Where is the history of this character? - Her downfalls? ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Trembling Power: Chapter Three
Hello. Kanome here with a review. Okay, I love this chapter so far. I guess the main conflict is this story is inner conflict in herself. That's what I like ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: If my lashes flutter will I fall apart?
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, this poem is really good. I like how sweet and romantic it is, yet it's saddening and heart-breaking to read. Nitpicks: ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter One
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Wow, I can't believe he's still alive. I thought he was having a nightmare when he woke up in the vehicle, but ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Prologue
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I have to say, this story is really well-written, and I thought there was love in the air, but a twist came ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Knight In Shining Armor
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Oh wow, this story has got me hooked. It seemed like an Aladden story, but with a girl as the main character. ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Better Days Ch.2
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. As you may know, I read the first chapter, and it was pretty good. This chapter is interesting also, so I would ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Victim
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. All I can say is I feel really down right now from this poem. It sounds like you got this from the ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: The Way I used To LOVE You by: dvena schleig Chp.1
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, I like this story so far. It's dramatic and involves past romance experiences, which is sometimes hurtful to think about. Nitpick: ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: FrostBite chapter 1
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Okay, this story is off to a good start. I like it because it introduces a new species that no one has ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: End It With a Bang.
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. Strange, you butt D: I am a freaking Knight of the Green Room and this is how you treat moi?! Just kidding ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: The Teenage Years (Chapter One)
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. I like this story so far. It's interesting. I also love the description in the story, also the imagery. Nitpick: I only ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Angelus Meus
Hello. Kanome here with a review. Oh wow, I loved this story. It was descriptive, which is a really good element to have. The story also had imagery, which helps ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Wide Island
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. First of all, I was so used to reading poems on the left or center, this caught me off guard pretty quick ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Flower Garden
Hello. Kanome here with a review for you. The ending has made me sad.. I felt the emotion the plant was feeling because it didn't feel special. I like the ...
Jun 30, 2014