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Re: Midnight Sensations Chapter I (PART ONE)
Midnight Sensations “We are what, we are. Nothing more, nothing less” Chapter I “Ria, your parents tell me you’ve been acting up again.” Selena said in her soothing voice. should ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: We make our monsters.
Were those stars? Brief flashes in the sky beyond the thin and sickly clouds appeared should it be just appear? You change tenses. so vividly even if for a second. ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: A Vampires Kiss
So i'm reading this out at a youngwriters exhibition tomorrow... i need a lot of confidence! are there any improvements that can be made? if so your help is appreciated! ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Devil's Angel
For those of you who don' know, a minotaur is a Greek monster with the head of a bull, the torso of a man, and the lower limbs of a ...
Feb 14, 2010
