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I'm quite aware this is almost an entire month late. But that's kind of how I work. And since I'm quite interested in seeing you grow so here we go: ...

Totally did this on time. >.> Yup. We had a fair discussion on what your issue is, so, considering that, I won't make this a line by line. I think ...

My dear Jags. You're getting better and better. However, there's one issue that arises in this. And that is that you take metaphors, words etc, and don't continue them or ...

Hi Blackbird. Here as requested. : ) This was nice, your poetry is a pleasure to read but there are three things that made it less then ideal in my ...

Hey Flower. Here as requested. Now, I'm going to say, I found this really... boring honestly. I knew what was gonna happen before it happened, the word choice was bland, ...

Hi there, Blackbird. I'm here to fulfill your request to my best. Though I'm not a big fan, I will agree that you've given a little fresh breath into a ...

So, I've finally gotten around to this request. I'm so sorry this is so late. The first thing I'll say, even if it is in a spoiler, pleasepleaseplease never do ...

You're a dictionary in a human's body. My gosh. However I am torn between enjoying this thoroughly and not liking it at all. And I will tell you why: an ...

Hey Ellie :) As requested, but I warn you I'm horribly rusty, so please excuse me in advance. First things first. I recommend you review the concept of an extended ...

Finally have some time. I'll keep this general and opinionated, as you've had some marvelous reviews prior to this. I found this almost like chewing on a brick that was ...

Reviewwwww is here. Now bear with me, I am ill and not everything I say will make sense, so if it doesn't you know where to find me. I assume ...

Jesus Christ Navita. xD You've had a thorough analysis of your piece so I'm going to keep this general. I think you should get a pat on the back for ...

... I was halfway done and the page refreshed... .________. Ugh, I hate that. Dishes - The emotion you portray is good, well communicate in the respect to the point ...

Sometimes I forget to sacrifice imagery to emotion. Something you've done here, even if it wasn't your intent. The emotion is raw, unbarred by a dozen images. Even though you ...

Hi Ducky. This seems to be an angsty pondering of a teenager. In stop and go traffic. I jerked from generic idea to generic idea. So your a girl who ...