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Hi Carbon, as requested. I dislike villanelles, or any sort of formatting really. But that's me. This poem, regarding content and choices you made, is terribly pretentious. The ideology you're ...

Hi ehte, I'm sorry I didn't get to this sooner! I totally forgot about my WRFF thread What this lacks is well the imagery. It's lacking in the sense of ...

Galerius: I rewrote it, but didn't do you much justice. I had my third chat with death last night and cigarette smoke curled against my skin - and eyes. Chicago ...

Jazzeh, I won't look at the #1 draft, just #2. this is nice. A little boring, but nice. I like the simplicity in your poetry, it suits your tone well ...

I am a kind reviewer I promise c: ... kind of. Pointers, well! Firstly, I say don't make it so superficial, And the bench looked like this and the winter ...

Because you're whining about a lack of reviews. I'll do you the favour to review this, even though I have lots of things I need to do. Firstly, I'm glad ...

Lad and Kaitlin, I promised this ages ago and I think I still owe Kaitlin a review. So, I thought I'd drop in on this. I didn't chew up my ...

As requested, I'll present myself here as friendly competition with the best intentions. I'm sorry I couldn't get to it any sooner. I can appreciate the attempt at duality here, ...

Navita and MMM gave you a good run-down, and you know very well what you're doing so I'll keep with simple and short. #1. I love the fact you wrote ...

Kylan good sir, I present review version 2.0 we've already discussed this but I have to keep up the pretense I'm a hurtling mass of never ending criticism and nitpicks. ...

Hi blackbird nice to see you around again. This reads really nicely but it fails at any attempt to develop and work as one. All together what's lacking is a ...

Hiya Penezenka, as I shall be merciless when completing your request. Yes, it is interesting. No, I don't like this compared to some of your work. I'm sitting through this ...

As your friend competition, I'm here to leave a few helpful hints for ya. Firstly. I say, strip it down forget the imagery. Tell it to us straight. Secondly, not ...

Hey Dreamy, as requested. Eh, as I read in your blog you're kind of out of your element? It shows, though it's always nice to see people try out poetry ...

Mm, you need to hang around these parts of town more often. Very you - comfortable and soft, tightly woven and you draw the reader in immediately. This particular piece ...