Kalliope

Hello sodapop, is it too late to welcome you to the site? Naah, welcome! If you ever need any help feel free to drop me a line. =) Lets get ...

Hi there, I read this, because the title intrigued me and I was definitely not disappointed. While you frequently rhyme it always goes with the flow and not in one ...

Hi there, gee, I'm sorry it took my such a long time to get to this. Hope still want some feedback. One thing that consumed a lot of time was ...

Hello XxxDo ^_^ sorry, for taking so long, but I guess now I'm here, so that's good. I was just looking over Demeter's review and had to laugh, because I, ...

Hey Sela, this is not going to be a real in depth critique, because I am simply too tired for one of those right now. However I did read the ...

Hi Sister Awesome, ^_^ I totally owe you a review for just laying back and enjoying the last few of your things things I read. (Bad Kalli, bad Kalli!) Sooo, ...

Hey Hannah, sorry for taking so long to reply. I thought this was great for multiple reasons: 1) We all so much expected and wanted her and Aiden to become ...

Hey Hannah, I really liked this part. Conflict! Yay! Nutty already pointed out the college/party/parents/home thing. I suppose she's old enough to not have to ask her parents "Can I ...

Hey Hannah, I thought I'd give you quick review for this one, too. As I already told you the switching tenses thing is executed nicely here, so no complaints on ...

Hey Hannah, whoa, someone posted a lot today! :D [EDIT: Ahem.. yesterday...]Might be smarter to post one part of a story at one time, just to get people hooked and ...

Hey Just_Listen, I just have a few quick comments on this one from looking at it briefly, dear: 1) Have you thought about dividing it into stanzas? It's kind of ...

Hey Just_Listen, welcome to YWS! Glad to see you found your way here. I'm sure the site will help you improve your writing and you probably have some great advice ...

Hey there, I'm glad you're happy about the song you wrote, that's the most important thing. You have great flow here and I'm sure it goes wonderfully with the music. ...

Hey June, thought I'd review something of yours. =) This was rather short, even for a short piece, however you managed to create a constant air of fear and not ...

Hey there, this is actually rather nice for a second song. =) I did however notice that you do a lot of rhyming, which doesn't necessarily help the flow. It ...