Kale

Thanks for the review. :D This section seems to drone on a bit, and does not actually do anything for the poem. I would consider removing it. It might be ...

Thank you both for your high praise. X3 I am not quite sure, but I believe 'demises' should be 'demise' because I think 'demise' is one of those words that ...

Fixed the typos. *feels silly for missing them after having proofread thrice* I see no reason for the struck out line. Without it, it is implied in bedroom - as ...

The socks play a pretty important role fairly soon. :3 Thanks for the suggestions and the critique. *sends love* I'll PM you if I remember to. x_X

Thanks for the reviews. I've fixed the underline/italics bit. When I previewed the post, the italics didn't seem very noticeable, so I changed it to underline. Big mistake, apparently. XD ...

I enjoyed writing this chapter. It still needs a bit of refining (and a bit of a trim), though. :P --- To: King Carl of Caeldon My liege, As of ...

Long chapter up ahead in which Thirry makes his return to consciousness! :P --- The New Overlord or I've Been Stabbed in the Liver and You Want Me to Do ...

Glad you both enjoyed it. :D I think you meant taken? Not take in? No. I meant "take in." He is taking in her love like a black hole takes ...

Thanks you guys. :3 Your reviews make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. This sentence has a few minor things - first of all, it's a run-on. Second of ...

Thanks for the reviews. n_n I haven't read Thirry's story. Is this a prologue to it, or...? It's more of a side-story and intended to mostly stand alone. You don't ...

I almost forgot. Wasn't Arthur wounded in the first chapter? What's he doing running out and about, battling the forces of evil? Also, when did he get the wound treated? ...

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed this. n_n Thirry's story is a comedy? how so? It's kind of tough to explain. XD All sorts of things, good and bad and ridiculous, ...

Thanks. It was a bit of a challenge figuring out how a three-year old would think, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. :D

And here is Chapter 3, which contains fluff. o_o ======= Dissention in the Ranks or Mopping Up the Scourge of Bathwaters Thirilight lay in bed, deathly pale and barely breathing. ...

Before you have always shown from this perspective just his thoughts so it sounded kind of odd to have action as well, I'd maybe rephrase it for this chapter so ...