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Thanks for pointing those out, Tayla. They've been fixed. :D And besides that, it's very separate from all of those ideas. Whee! Success! X3 Why did you choose not to ...

Thanks for the comments you two. :D @lily - Laura-Lee is the person the poem is being addressed to. The Lorelei is a giant rock in the Rhine River and ...

Shock, though, at your cutting all those oxymorons. And I actually think that they're beautiful. Talk about falling out of favour. That's the thing though -- they sound pretty, but ...

I wish I could take credit for the hilarity, but it is mostly Shakespeare's doing. "Romeo and Juliet," contrary to popular belief, was written to be a comedy . The ...

Well I'm not that fluent in typing. So I will miss some keys or type some extra on mistake, okay? That is why it is a good idea to proofread ...

Thank you, everyone. :D You're all so helpful. "Blazed?" That's a pretty unusual verb. Its usual meaning is "to shine brightly" so I'm not sure if this is the right ...

Thanks you three, especially you, Hannah, for the reviews. @Hannah - My ego took a pretty hard blow, but it will live, and I can see where you're coming from. ...

Thanks, you two. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. @delphi - The "and"s are there for the sake of rhythm and overall flow. If you remove them, the sentence does ...

Woah. Lots of reviews. o_o Thanks, everyone, for the feedback. :D @Wilgot - Thanks for reminding me about metaphors. :D @Meadow - "Tsarevich Ivan" is very similar to "The Golden ...

Thanks for the feedback you two. :3 @spring - I already used that site, but they don't have many synonyms for the color or made of gold golden, which is ...

Thanks for the feedback. :D Reading each of your different reactions has been very enlightening. @Mars and Kaitelyn - I do believe that this poem can stand alone without the ...

Wait what whuh? They named him when he first spoke? Poor baby had no name for ages! Actually, he had a baby name that they called him, but they decided ...

And I just realized I forgot to post part two... XP Well, here it is. --- The door of the inn swung open, and silhouetted in its frame was a ...

Ignore the accent. >.> It's very rough and not pretty. Well, basically this entire chapter is pretty rough, so critique away. Split into two parts because it wound up being ...

Thanks for the feedback. :D @Evi - This poem is pretty old, and I don't remember what exactly I meant with that particular stanza. I based this loosely off a ...