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You might want to make that clearer by changing the title.

Even if you're not sure about them being mistakes anymore, it would still be really helpful to me if you could point them out. This is supposed to be a ...

Thanks for the review. The line you pointed out as a mistake isn't a mistake. When you talk about something in general, you don't need an article before it since ...

Thanks for the review! You are the first person to mention these things, which is pretty cool and I want to pick your brain about all the things. ;P "He" ...

Thanks for the review! I really like Grunkle too. Maybe one day I'll write more stories with him, such as the battles he always won and lost. He's just one ...

Glad you liked it.

Thank you for the review! Descriptions have always been one of my weaker points, and I'll definitely be focusing on it more in later drafts. For the moment though, I'm ...

It isn't just the broken boy fixing the broken girl; it's the broken boy fixing the broken girl because love fixes everything. If you were so afraid of falling into ...

I said it's too easy because the entire story, Penny is fighting against getting better, and then suddenly she goes along with Peter. Why does she stop fighting? How does ...

Thanks for the review. John is running because he just had a pretty bad argument with his father. This part of the story is pretty late into the beginning, so ...

Hi. Thanks for the review. I have a few questions, especially since one of your sentences seems to have lost half of itself somewhere. I was wondering how you think ...

My sister didn't review this, so I have no idea what you're talking about?

I didn't critique it as an essay written for a class. In your edit, you make it pretty clear that your intent was to persuade people to reconsider feminism in ...

The closest term to what you're thinking of is "egalitarian". The thing is, all egalitarians are feminists as egalitarians work to correct all forms inequality, and as feminism works to ...

It seems my YWS legacy is to make lasting first impressions. You are not the first person to tell me this.