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I'm glad to hear that!

I have no clue what's going on, but you were right. I did enjoy the couple hundred words on building codes.

*I am not writing to conform

From the first line, and in bold so you can see the assonance: your soul mate rolls o ver like phone There is a massive difference between reviews which are ...

I'll think about it. Originally, I was planning to have that line set off with a parentheses or an indent ot something, but then I figured the shift in rhythm ...

I think so. The commitment soulmate implies in the first line is intentional because people do take the important and irreplaceable things and people they have for granted, or don't ...

1. Who said anything about lovers? 2. Poetry comes in many forms, and many people have spent a very long time trying to define what poetry is and failed to ...

Thanks for the review, though I'm a bit confused about some of the things you mentioned in it. In particular, your comment about how "soulmate" should be "partner" confused me ...

Great news! You are right on the dot with your interpretations. And I do like ambiguity of meanings in my poems, so I'll take it as mission accomplished on that ...

I think you may have me confused with someone else since I don't recall talking with you before now, and I typically avoid commenting on vocabulary in my reviews except ...

Hello there and sorry for the late reply. I'm just seeing this review now. Thanks for reviewing this, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading. To address a few points you ...

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You're welcome, and I'm glad you found it helpful. :3

You're very welcome! I'm glad you found my review helpful. Since I hadn't read the earlier parts, I wasn't familiar with the characters or plot thus far, which made it ...

Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying! As for the last two lines, I feel they include a bit more nuance than just having the first ...