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Re: An Alien World- Chapter 3
Hello there (again) PersephoneMary, As I said on your script I reviewed not too long ago, I bet you thought you'd never get a review on this . Well, I'm ...
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: Not My Kind of Shoe
Hello there snickerdooly, I bet you thought you'd never get a review on this . Well, I'm here to prove you wrong. *insert mad/diabolical/insane laughter/giggles/cackling/whatever here* For too long ha
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: Revenge of the Wolves Chpt 1
Hail, Fellow Knight Omniyus! I bet you thought you'd never get a review on this . Well, I'm here to prove you wrong. *insert mad/diabolical/insane laughter/giggles/cackling/whatever here* For too long
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: The Next Arthur- Act One
Hello there PersephoneMary, I bet you thought you'd never get a review on this . Well, I'm here to prove you wrong. *insert mad/diabolical/insane laughter/giggles/cackling/whatever here* For too long
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: I don't know...
Hello there Adriana, I bet you thought you'd never get a review on this . Well, I'm here to prove you wrong. *insert mad/diabolical/insane laughter/giggles/cackling/whatever here* For too long have ...
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: The Underworld Society (Enough to get a little interesting)
Hello there mithrim96, I bet you thought you'd never get a review on this . Well, I'm here to prove you wrong. *insert mad/diabolical/insane laughter/giggles/cackling/whatever here* For too long have ...
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: Magic can conceal you, love can hold you forever (R.W.3)
Hello there Charlii101, I bet you thought you'd never get a review on this . Well, I'm here to prove you wrong. *insert mad/diabolical/insane laughter/giggles/cackling/whatever here* For too long have
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: Nightshade Chapter 7
Hello there phoenixwriter, I bet you thought you'd never get a review on this . Well, I’m here to prove you wrong. *insert mad/diabolical/insane laughter/giggles/cackling/whatever here* For too long
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: Wasteland
Hello there SRMeredith, and welcome to YWS. Before I get into the review itself, I'd just like to mention something about reviewing. Basically, the more you review other members works, ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: DERP
Hello there derplolcyan, and welcome to YWS. Before I get into the review itself, I'd just like to mention something about reviewing. Basically, the more you review other members works, ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: Titanomacy-second (non sequential) chapter
Hello there blackclaw1, and welcome to YWS. Before I get into the review itself, I'd just like to mention something about reviewing. Basically, the more you review other members works, ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: When the city sleeps.
She hated Assholes like that. This sentence contains a tense shift. The rest of this section is in present, so having a case of past tense (hated) is really jarring, ...
Feb 5, 2013 -
Re: Best Friends Forever, eh?
Hello there thegilbygirl, and welcome to YWS. Before I get into the review itself, I'd just like to mention something about reviewing. Basically, the more you review other members works, ...
Feb 5, 2013 -
Re: Eddy
This poem flows beautifully which, considering the imagery and the subject, was perfect. I do have one quibble though: your punctuation. While it's grammatically-correct for the most part (which is ...
Feb 5, 2013 -
Re: - taken down 2 -
You have some nice imagery going on in here, and I thought the allusion to Jesus was quite well-handled, but this poem's weakest point is its enjambment. Let's take the ...
Feb 5, 2013