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Kaitlin

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dancing with the Darkness

    I really enjoyed this poem, especially the imagery with the black guest-ghosts and the waves of the crimson dress. Just a note to watch your use of "their" and "they're", ...

    Dec 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Different Kind of Gold

    I loved, loved this poem, especially the imagery. I thought the contrast of "claws and angel fingers" was brilliant, as well as the singing with the maddening eyes. The entire ...

    Dec 27, 2010


In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien