Kaitlin

Darling, darling, this is gorgeous. Your therapy manifests itself in beautiful ways; I guess that's a blessing for the rest of us. I love your first two stanzas. I adore ...

Is it possible for me to love you even more than I already do? Why, yes. Yes it is. Ummm. I've been warned to give good reviews or else I ...

Hmmm. Here I am, helping an author in need. Doubt you need my help, cuz this is lovely, but here we go. First off, I'd watch the dialogue. I'm getting ...

Hey there. I love that you choose this topic to grapple with--it's extremely difficult to write about, because the topic is so morally wrong and sensitive. You've done a good ...

This won't be such a good review, natch, because I haven't reviewed in ages and ages. Ha. :) Henry kept time in his closet the same way he wrote letters, ...

I feel like I haven't reviewed in forever so this will be rusty. Aren't you excited? :) 1. My first reaction upon reading this was something alone the lines of: ...

You'll be fantastic, I'm sure. Reading this, it tends to seem like you're rambling & going on and on a bit, but I read it again imagining someone reading it ...

Get excited. 1. Take it out of italics. Please? I feel like if you do that it immediately makes it twice as good, but that might only be because I ...

Is this about someone with a mental handicap? I suppose that is my initial interpretation. Mostly based off this line: “Mothafucka ge' out dis street, this our hood G” and ...

Well, my dear, there's been some lovely critique on this--even some critique I did not fully understand! I am not nearly artistic enough for this site--but I'm just going to ...

I love this. They have not created the adjectives to describe how much I love this. You did a fantastic job of creating new metaphors to describe your love without ...

I really, really loved this. The first time I read it I didn't entirely understand it, but that's because you have this huge block of figurative language right away. The ...

Oh, you. First of all, I have to rave about how incredibly consistent your narrator's voice has been throughout. It's the same dude--and it always sounds like the same dude! ...

This is absolutely gorgeous/stunning/beautiful, but if I went through and told you everything I liked about it, then this review would be longer than the story itself. So. Quickly, then: ...

Ooooo. I like this. Or, to be more exact: I love it when people narrate instead of have dialogue--if that makes sense--and I love how your ephemeral girl talks, then, ...