KaitelynMiller

This is really good. I generally click on stories with ratings because those are the writers that know their stories the best. I am glad I do that becasue your ...

Hey tnme22 This is really good. I think you should describe Jaymi better. I can't really picture her in my mind. Also talk about peoples facial expressions, thoughts, the way ...

Hey Kyllorac, This poem is extremely interesting. The only problem I have is that you had to explain the psychology part at the beginning. It kind of ruins the depth ...

I actually really like this. It will appeal to many readers emotions. Everyone has felt used at one point in their lives. It will really let readers connect to your ...

This is a really amazing way to write a story about homosexuals. This topic is very controversial. Most people wouldn't dare write about this because of the fights and such ...

You have a two different types of Point of View's. First person and third person limited . You got to stick to one point of view or it will distract ...