Kaila

thank you aaaaaagain for another review that made me smile :) :D

Thanks for reading again!! Yeah, this chapter was mainly just to reintroduce Kassi and Sila and expand a little on their relationship, so I'm glad it sounds like I did ...

Thank you so much! This really made me smile :) Also, thanks for the comment about my starting sentences with "Kassi" all the time... I just read over it again ...

Thank you so much!! :D I hope you keep reading!

Okay! Thanks so much! I can definitely see where you're coming from with your suggestions, and I'll do the best I can to use them--especially the stuff about the scene ...

why did my comment end up on here twice? what?

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Aaw :) I think this is good. Your writing is solid and easy to understand, and you express yourself very well. Are you going to continue this as a novel ...

Aaw :) I like this. It's kind of cheesy, but still I like it. It makes nice use of metaphors and poetry. I also like how it is addressed to ...