Kaia

I figured that. Hm. Do sorcerers not have curses, I wonder. (you don't need to answer if that's explained later or you don't want to. I was just curious. ;)) ...

THE ALPACA!!! Hello, hello!!! Well, you're a good writer, so of course I'm gonna review your works! *Thumbs up!* But wow! You jumped in right at the middle! No problem. ...

Okay...I might be understanding now...But I don't understand your references to spiderman/batman as Im not familiar with that. (I'm a crayfish. I live under a rock) What do you mean ...

I always love how you say you're gonna leave a short review and it ends up being the longest review. ;) Ha, ha! Yeh. I love writing mystery because then ...

Hey, Alice! Thanks for the review! Jed is totally the detective. XD. Like you said, I guess it runs in the family. :) I actually figured out about the USB ...

So....actually when I started writing this, I didn't even know about spy cameras and stuff. So I thought I was making this all up. Then, I chanced to hear a ...

Yeh. I figured you caught on immediately. ;) So far no one but you caught on that fast. And yep. I couldn't let Mikel do it to Jed, too. So ...

Wwhhhhatttt? Somebody would really do that? That's cruel!! Ha, and serve that instructor right for saying that by STILL not thing the target after all the nervousness is gone. XD. ...

No problem there. I'm like YWS's Grammarly when it comes to my reviews. ;) Hope you have a great day!

Ugh uh! It keeps randomly taking segments and deciding they're links. Dunno why... it's annoying. Anyway, thanks for the review. :)

Wow. There were some really good points in there. Even though I may not keep this scene, I might go back and implement your suggestions. I was thinking there was ...

*Thumbs up!* Thanks. I'll give you a review when I get a moment. :)

Aw, don't feel bad. I figured it was late when you wrote this. But thank you! I look forward to the edited review and the new one. :)

Yeah, XD. It does really get to the imagination, lol.

Hehe. Yeah. :) So, the only time I hinted to his job was when Shiko said this to him... I thought you were a photographer for that Affluance company Zybryn ...