Kaia

Hi! Thanks for the review! :) I will be looking into repetitive description at some point in my future edits and will keep that in mind. Thanks for the critique! ...

Hi, VengefulReaper!! I will actually very likely be taking this scene out because I felt like it dramatically slowed the pace the story. You're thoughts on it are about the ...

Ah, okay. I wasn't sure if she'd had them before. You're welcome! I enjoyed the read. :)

Hello, my dear neighborhood ant! Thanks for the review. I have had many reviewers tell me I tend to overuse phrases. Some of that is largely true, but I also ...

Thanks! I've been trying to use stronger adjectives lately. :) That's totally right!! Yeah! Zybryn really really really doesn't want to know anymore and is trying to convince himself he ...

I have plans for that. :) I don't have too much else to say to add on to that because I don't want to give off spoilers, but again I ...

Yup. :) I thought it was only fair. :) And oh, yes, does he scream at me for it!! Awwww. You're so sweet!! Thanks for saying that. That really means ...

Hey Mercedes! Thanks for dropping by to give me a review. :) As always, I enjoy reading your reviews. :) So, a lotta people have been commenting on this chapter ...

Sure! Glad to help out a fellow TORTOISE!!

Coooookies!!! Hello, hello!! This scene was something that I had to rewrite and rewrite and rewrite because dealing with so many characters at once is something I really struggle with. ...

Heyo, Alice! Thanks for dropping by to give me another review. Much appreciated!! Yeah. I thought thatd be like the perfect time for those words to recho in Jed's mind, ...

Ah. Okay. That makes sense. Thanks for clarifying that for me. :)

Aw, well thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it. :) I'm just unhappy that I never got a notification about it...It's been happening a lot more than it should be. I ...

Hiii!! I'm REALLLLY sorry I didn't respond to this until now. I was ever notified about it. Are there any other chapters of mine you reviewed that I missed? Thanks ...

Okay, yeh. I didn't get this. Turns out there's ANOTHER review by somebody else that I never got notified about. Really sorry about this...(even tho it isn't my fault) Ha ...