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Re: Shadow's Rising Chapter 1
Hi! I seem to have run across an interesting piece sitting over here in the corner of the Green Room. Here stands the tale of a dragon and his master. ...
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Re: LMS VI: Silver and Silk 1.4
I seem to have come across an interesting bit here in the green room. I just jumped in, so don't mind me if I'm not totally aware of what's going ...
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Re: The Last Spell 12.2
Hi, I'm here for a quick review. I noticed your piece in the green room, and that it has not yet been reviewed, so I thought I'd take a look. ...
Jun 2, 2023 -
Re: whydogirls?
Hi, I'm here to leave you a review. Well, you mentioned quite a list here, and I can't say I agree with everything on it, but I do get the ...
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Re: Ghost Girls: Part Two
Well, I guess I get to be the first person to leave a review, here. Wahoo! Awesome chapter, once again! Clearly, you have an amazing imagination, one that I hope ...
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Re: Stones of Goodness
Greetings from a fellow writing friend! Kaia here to spin by and give you a review. So here we have another one of Rinisha's infamous death fables. Okay, just joking. ...
May 28, 2023 -
Re: Ghost Girls
I don't honestly even know where to begin reviewing here. This was an AWESOME piece. You have a very cool imagination to be able to come up with all of ...
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Re: these feels are rated e for everyone
Well, I do have to say this is quite relatable. I think everyone gets a moment or two (or twenty thousand) when they'd find lines in this relatable. I think ...
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Re: Hybrids: Chapter 3
Hi, Mercedes! I want to start by saying thanks for keeping the chapters short. It makes it a lot easier to focus on one scene at a time. I really ...
May 28, 2023 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 3
Greetings, VengefulReaper! I'm here to leave you another review. This was an excellent chapter. I love how it flowed nicely and had good variation of sentence structure and length. Obviously, ...
May 28, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 2
Hi, Merecedes I'm here for another review. Let me start with what I really liked...the emotion. You've really built up Yagi and Sakuro to be excellent characters that the reader ...
May 25, 2023 -
Re: "Not Today but Someday" Chapter
Hi! I saw that your piece has been in the green room for a bit, so I thought I'd spin by and help to try to change that. ;) So, ...
May 24, 2023 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 2
Hi, VengefulReaper! Thought I'd drop by to give you another review. First, let me start by saying how much I really enjoyed this chapter. Generally speaking, fantasy of any sort ...
May 24, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 1
Hi, Mercedes! First off, great chapter. I like how they're short so when I only got a couple of minutes I can squeeze one in. :) The conflict between Yagi ...
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Re: Little Sophia
Hi! I saw you in the posts in the forums frequently, and eventually, my curiosity overcame me, so I decided to check you (and your writing) out. So, here I ...
May 18, 2023
