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  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Message from Heaven

    If I first say friend, then sister, would that imply that the friends are really close, or would that just confuse people?

    Sun Feb 23, 2014 11:24 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Message from Heaven

    Thanks for reviewing! The original rhyme wasn't intended, it just kind of snuck it's way in there... I wasn't really writing about anybody in particular, so I guess referring to ...

    Sun Feb 23, 2014 11:12 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stained Glass Life

    I love your reviews. :) Okay, so, about that first thing you pointed out- I was thinking about the person maybe looking out of a window at the tree, and ...

    Fri Feb 21, 2014 11:49 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stained Glass Life

    I love your reviews. :) Okay, so, about that first thing you pointed out- I was thinking about the person maybe looking out of a window at the tree, and ...

    Fri Feb 21, 2014 11:49 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Waiting

    Thanks for reviewing (and liking)!! I'd meant for this to be a more serious poem, but ended up editing the heck out of it, so I guess it didn't quite ...

    Sun Feb 16, 2014 12:09 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Waiting

    Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it! :)

    Sun Feb 16, 2014 12:05 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Waiting

    Thanks for pointing that out, I will definitely consider your advice! :)

    Sun Feb 16, 2014 12:02 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Waiting

    Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm glad I was able to write something worthwhile.

    Sun Feb 16, 2014 12:00 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Waiting

    Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it! :)

    Sun Feb 16, 2014 12:47 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Waiting

    Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it! :)

    Sun Feb 16, 2014 12:47 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Voices of Silence

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! And welcome to YWS!

    Fri Feb 14, 2014 3:47 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Voices of Silence

    Thanks for the review! (Could you please reread the poem, because I accidentally skipped half of it when I was posting! Sorry!! :) )

    Sun Feb 09, 2014 1:29 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Voices of Silence

    Thanks for reviewing! (I was writing this poem from memory and totally forgot about half of it, but I fixed it now, so please to reread? :) )

    Sun Feb 09, 2014 1:26 pm
  • Poetry » Politics, Other Re: The First

    Love it!! :)

    Thu Feb 06, 2014 2:52 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stained Glass Life

    :o I forgot I sent you this link... Oh well, I'm glad you like it!!

    Fri Jan 17, 2014 3:11 am


If food is poetry, is not poetry also food?
— Joyce Carol Oates