Kagi

Thanks guys these rewievs helped. Ill write more soon. Kaka

Thanks for the comments.

You know what sorry guys! But brontobeawriter, I didn't threaten not to write anymore,and you made me sound a whole lot worse! I deleted that comment,Just to suite you! I ...

Kay..edited Ethans part and er added on some more. NO likes yet tho. :( Romance must not be my thing. Kaka

Thanks guys.. I don't think Romance is my thing! :D :D Oh well

Heey.. If I get enough Likes and reviews I'll continue this..I'm not sure its up to stantard!! :D I mean its my first Romantic story so I need to know ...

Day One, I had gone to camp for the past three years, so the first day I saw you that year, I didn't think anything of it. You were pastors ...

OKay thank you guys.. I'll keep writing. Ill edit again soon when I have the time-LOL writing is a step by step thing right?! Yeah so I'll take all the ...

Well I edited it.. So is it better.. Need advice.. Where are nice people when I need them!? Tee hee hee only kidding guys.. X X :D

Okay uh thanks for the Advice.. I really don't wanna add on to this story,I mean make it longer.. I feel that if I wrote longer that, it would destroy ...

My first Romantic story. Hope its ok.. Review please!! Kakagirl X X

Haallo.. I luved this poem.. It made me gigglee.. Tee heee heee.. I wish I could write a poem about something as boring as a couch and make it actually ...

Woah! This should not be in other!! IN should be where it belong-IN short stories!! ITS FAB-U-LOUS! Good work.. Kakagilr X X

I liked it. I understand what you are saying.. Keep writing.. Kakagirl XX

Heey guyss.. I am not @ home so I only had a short time to write. I added another little piece and will add more soon-When I get more time... ...