Kagi

Ok, I've replied to most reviews. Thanks for everything guys, I really appreciate the effort you put into the reviews and the lovely likes that some people have donated. All ...

No problem, and those last two lines are so much better! As far as the first quote, you have every right to keep it and the personal it is the ...

Holy wow, 9 stars. Thanks everyone. What the Illama? Since when can you give stars?

She would thank you kidnly dear, if she were here.

Before you read, This is not my work. This is my little sister's, you see one day I forgot to logout as I often do. I came back online to ...

Thanks for all the reviews guys. I'm working on it, slowly. Slllooooooowly ;)

Thank you all for the reviews. They've been very helpful and I appreciate the detail you put into them. I've made some changes, swapped some words and added in a ...

Alright, only me again! So I'm going to run through all the general things now like plot, pace and charachters-that kind of thing. You started off the whole thing brilliantly. ...

Thank you everyone dearly for your time, and reviews. I love them and will treasure them forever, ;) Your points were taken into opinion and mistakes were changed. @Shrubbery: haven't ...

Thanks for the reviews, I got asked a couple of questions so here's hoping I help readers understand a few things. I was asked what was the point of the ...

Thank you everyone for the lovely reviews. I'm kind of amazed at how much depth you got into them, there wasn't really much to work with :lol: Anyhow, thank ya'll ...

DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNN! Back again FOR THE FINAL REVIEW. I'll work on plot mainly this time and description. This is a really long story so it's hard to comment. I'll ...

Heh back again to ramble on about your plot, imagery and general boring stuffs! :lol: --->> Ok, as I said previously your plot was very enjoyable. You didn't rush through ...

Good, exactly the feeling I wanyted to get across!

Luxy I'm about to scream at you. Why did you have to end there? Why? I need more MORE! If you dare take as long making the next chapter Ill ...