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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Too Many Secrets

    Hey stela. Sorry I have taken so long to get to this for you. Your link didn't work and you didn't give my the title so I was a little ...

    Feb 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Defiance (Chapter 3)

    Hey Maddy, Your not going to believe this but I just wrote a full length review, then my little baby puppy walked over the keyboard and pressed delete meaning I ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH

    Ok Jash. I'm so sorry that this has taken me forever. I bet your kind of sick of me saying this at this stage huh? Well I'm sorry. *There I ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What I Am

    Hey, This is an amazing poem. Really heartfelt and unique. I've never read anything quite like it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word. You have serious talent. I can't put ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Zee Poetic Side Of Life

    Hey anger. ;) How are you? Hows the wii fit going? *Laughs* Sorry that this review has to be short, I have about 2 milliminutes left on the laptop so ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: feelings

    Hey, I'm not really bothered to review your grammar, (Sorry) I didn't see anything major or minor for that matter, grammar wise. ;) At first when I looked at this, ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Clueless

    Hey Dudette, This is an epic story. I really like it. Your ending was amazing. Anyhow before I start commenting on your brilliance, I'll start with grammar. Here goes; Red ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Jerabeth, Chapter 1: 2 thousand years later. 

    Hey pen, here again. You have loads of hefty reviews that have pointed out your grammar mistakes so I won't point them out again, if you don't mind. Ok this ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Jerahbeth: preface

    Ok pen. I'll try heave my weary brain to review this for you but don't say I didn't warn you. Fantasy is not my thing. At all. I'll start with ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Love Rip My Heart Out

    Kakagirl here to review for you. I didn't see any errors so your lucky. You must have edited well. Your pace throughout the poem was really good, not slow but ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Losing You

    Hey. I'll review for you today. All in all this was well edited, I only found one real error in grammar. If I hadn't pf fallen for your beautiful hazel ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: How Steve met his wife

    Hey. I'll review for you today. First of all, there is a lot of editing that needs to be done here. There were a lot of tiny typos that popped ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Charlie and Logan- Chapter 5

    Luxy I'm about to scream at you. Why did you have to end there? Why? I need more MORE! If you dare take as long making the next chapter Ill ...

    Jan 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: perfect

    Coral, Everytime I log on to YWS nowadays (which is often) before I even check the featured works I'm postitve your work will be there. How right can I be? ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: An Ode to Google

    Evi! This poem is really good. It made me laugh, it's so true. We owe everything to google! How did you come up with such an original idea? It's preeeetty ...

    Jan 26, 2011


Don't aim at success--the more you aim at it and make it a target, the more you are going to miss it. For success, like happiness, cannot be pursued; it must ensue, and it only does so as the unintended side-effect of one's dedication to a cause greater than oneself or as the by-product of one's surrender to a person other than oneself.
— Viktor E. Frankl