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Re: Too Many Secrets
Hey stela. Sorry I have taken so long to get to this for you. Your link didn't work and you didn't give my the title so I was a little ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Defiance (Chapter 3)
Hey Maddy, Your not going to believe this but I just wrote a full length review, then my little baby puppy walked over the keyboard and pressed delete meaning I ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
Ok Jash. I'm so sorry that this has taken me forever. I bet your kind of sick of me saying this at this stage huh? Well I'm sorry. *There I ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: What I Am
Hey, This is an amazing poem. Really heartfelt and unique. I've never read anything quite like it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word. You have serious talent. I can't put ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Zee Poetic Side Of Life
Hey anger. ;) How are you? Hows the wii fit going? *Laughs* Sorry that this review has to be short, I have about 2 milliminutes left on the laptop so ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: feelings
Hey, I'm not really bothered to review your grammar, (Sorry) I didn't see anything major or minor for that matter, grammar wise. ;) At first when I looked at this, ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Clueless
Hey Dudette, This is an epic story. I really like it. Your ending was amazing. Anyhow before I start commenting on your brilliance, I'll start with grammar. Here goes; Red ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Jerabeth, Chapter 1: 2 thousand years later.
Hey pen, here again. You have loads of hefty reviews that have pointed out your grammar mistakes so I won't point them out again, if you don't mind. Ok this ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Jerahbeth: preface
Ok pen. I'll try heave my weary brain to review this for you but don't say I didn't warn you. Fantasy is not my thing. At all. I'll start with ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: My Love Rip My Heart Out
Kakagirl here to review for you. I didn't see any errors so your lucky. You must have edited well. Your pace throughout the poem was really good, not slow but ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Losing You
Hey. I'll review for you today. All in all this was well edited, I only found one real error in grammar. If I hadn't pf fallen for your beautiful hazel ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: How Steve met his wife
Hey. I'll review for you today. First of all, there is a lot of editing that needs to be done here. There were a lot of tiny typos that popped ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Charlie and Logan- Chapter 5
Luxy I'm about to scream at you. Why did you have to end there? Why? I need more MORE! If you dare take as long making the next chapter Ill ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: perfect
Coral, Everytime I log on to YWS nowadays (which is often) before I even check the featured works I'm postitve your work will be there. How right can I be? ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: An Ode to Google
Evi! This poem is really good. It made me laugh, it's so true. We owe everything to google! How did you come up with such an original idea? It's preeeetty ...
Jan 26, 2011
