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Re: Even stars must fall
I really enjoyed this as well, and I want to see more. Th transition was great. A really nice piece so far.
Oct 8, 2005 -
Re: The melody of life
That gave me some really nice images. I thought there was a pretty nice rhythm. Good work!
Oct 8, 2005 -
Re: Suicide With A Butter Knife
I want to hear this really bad. Sounds pretty cool, and the lyrics made me laugh. I think it's hilarious.
Oct 6, 2005 -
Re: :::jumping up and down to get your attention::: Read Please!
I liked the beat. Good job for a poem. I liked the standalone line. I think it would sound really nice read aloud. Nice job.
Oct 6, 2005 -
Re: One-Legged Sailor, Mack Marret
They both made me chuckle. Pretty nice limericks. I've written a few and they're a bit better than mine. My favorite was probably the second one, but they both are ...
Oct 1, 2005