Kafkaescence

Kafka here to review. Sorry if this is a bit short. Well, to be honest, I'm not quite sure what to say, Pundit. This is definitely a very powerful piece ...

Kafka here. So, first of all, congrats on placing second in my contest! Part of the deal was that I'd give you a nice, long review, so that's what is ...

Evening, Lumi. Before I get into the heart of the review, thanks for entering my contest! And congratulations, again, on placing third. This was well-deserving of the title. Now. I'll ...

Kafka here. So, first of all, congratulations on placing first in my contest! I'll try not to make this too long, but I hope you can forgive me if I ...

For long I hoped to light her heart aflame. This would be a good starting line, except for the fact that your tense is off - this should be in ...

Kafka here, as requested. I was going to do an overall review on this, but I noticed some nitpicks others hadn't mentioned that I thought might be worth pointing out. ...

I meant to say - congrats on winning second! Expect a decent review soon, although it seems others have found nothing to critique. I'll see if I can find anything ...

I just realized how late this review is! I'm extremely sorry. In fact, to make up for its lateness, I'll go ahead and review something else of yours after this ...

Lava! Just thought I'd stop by. I very much enjoyed reading this poem, even though short lines don't tend to sit well with me. I may or may not come ...

Your friendly neighborhood Kafka. Now. As nearly all of the reviews you have received thus far are things like: I loved it. Don't change anything. ...I thought I might offer ...

Kafka here. First of all, I'm glad you took a shot at describing a complex emotion. I'm not saying I think you particularly succeeded at the task (I'll expand a ...

Kafka here. The laundry isn't done, Good first line. Nice and relatable. Sometimes easy starts work better than overly descriptive ones. and you're down, I'm not sure what this is ...

I think I said I was going to review this a while ago, so here I am to do just that. I'll take this stanza by stanza. I am ready, ...

Sorry about the delay. Been busy. the wash breaks from the line, Personally - and this could just be me - I'm used to "wash" being a verb, and not ...

So sorry it's taken me this long to get to your story. I've been really busy. Anyway. Here's your review, as requested. Oh, and just a small warning: I haven't ...