Kafkaescence

‘...and Eesh, not sure whether to capitalize this "and" or not. There're good arguments for either choice, so I guess the best thing to do would be to leave it ...

This is great. It's one of those rare poems that not only radiate with beautiful imagery, but radiate from beneath the surface. The representations are so simple, so parallel with ...

Eesh, forgot I owed you this one. Apropos A random word? What's the significance? We don't know the context. . Her parting word, etched in black ink on a torn ...

I'm heeere. This was intriguing, Lava. I'm assuming that its purpose was more scientific than it was literary - "scientific," of course, meaning science-fiction-experimentalism, if you get my meaning.

Took a little while, but here I am. So. There wasn't a whole lot wrong with this, in my eyes. The symbolism was crisp and simple, and the prose complemented ...

So. This wasn't a bad poem. There were a few powerful lines, a few interesting pieces of imagery, some sense of a moral conclusion. However, I'll admit that this wasn't ...

Urgh, sorry I'm so late in getting to this review. I have no excuse. Looks like you already have chapter three out as well.... This was a good chapter. It ...

I've been noticing traces of a story beyond what glimmers on the surface for a while now, and now that the story has reached its conclusion, I can finally diagnose ...

So! Let's get this show on the road. A woman. With dark hair and red eyes. A longing stare of a lost baby, a lost mind. We hit with a ...

Ooookay. Action's really picking up here. I guess that's a good thing? Gore-laden violence which will as a rule surface sometime or another in zombie apocalypse stories like these has ...

Who is Ross? I'm starting to think I don't even know. I don't know if you want Ross to be the all knowing, leader-in-time-of-crisis type person, because I see that ...

Of course we're going to have to delve into the science behind the fog at one point or another. It was really just a matter of how skillfully and believably ...

Not my favorite chapter. Firstly, it makes absolutely no sense that Ross would get his flare gun in the first place. You provide us only with a tentative and halfhearted ...

Back! Miss me? IV – The birds and a walk in the fog Probably should capitalize the title, yeah? With every minute that ticked by, a new theory Theory about ...

Mkay. Tension's definitely building again here, after that little recess that was chapter two. The cowboy is kind of a picnictime anxiety-booster - really, you can tell from the very ...