Kafkaescence

How goes it? Good? Good. This wasn't bad. It was a start; that's what you were aiming for, that's what you got. It wasn't a great one - as I ...

Hi. So, before I get to critique, I really want to commend you on this. Your descriptions were breathtaking; in a way they remind me of Lovecraft, but from another ...

I don't know what I'll be able to give you in this review that will in any way vary from the horde of praise you've already accumulated. I just felt ...

Alright! So. This was pretty good. You have a nice taste for imagery; phrases like "cerulean silk,/with forgotten frayed ends" evoke strong mental portraits of what is going on, and ...

Please just left-align this and leave the color black? Changing the format does nothing to make your story any better, and in fact hinders the reading more than anything. I'm ...

I couldn't bring myself to review the individual parts. I really think that the story can't be judged without having a view of its entirety. I was at a loss ...

Brittani I really love my him; that is what much I know. I have loved him since we were in 8th eighth grade, ever since we had history together. I ...

Ahaha. It's hard not to appreciate stories narrated from the perspective of inanimate objects, and I think you've done a respectable job here. For its length, your story of an ...

................ I AM A SOUL................. In the rainy forest deep in it's core Deep in the core of a(n) (adjective) rainforest , I seek the wondrous place which all souls ...

Ah, liked this. It had that overgrown style that is prominent in most of your poetry, but, as opposed to past reads, this felt much more...cohesive, as far as the ...

Um, so. I won't say that I liked this. That would be commensurate to saying that I liked the cliché(s) that frame it, and I don't. I find them irksome. ...

How long has it been since I reviewed poetry. This was interesting, Mustard. It's a nice commentary on mortality and its clasp on bliss - the two being, in essence, ...

Mmm...again, interesting. I wouldn't say it has quite the same...moral cohesiveness, let's call it, as Life After . Its foundations are shaky. You seem, more than anything here, to be ...

Not bad but, yeah, there is some editing that is in order. I won't go into that, because I decided after reading this that "macros" would be of more use ...

Saw you didn't have any comments on this, so I figured I'd offer you one of my measly reviews. My main concern is the ending - it seemed far too ...