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Re: A Matter of Conscience - Part 1
Hey!! Great story! I have some feedback for you. So first I would like to know the characters names. Second spelled sunrise as "sun rise". Just remember that it's one ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: family travels
Hey persimijakob (aka Jacob)!! I have some feed back for you! So first it seems like you capitalized somethings that didn't need to be capitalized. Next, I would be better ...
Mar 11, 2016