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You're so sad (eye-roll). That market guy had greasy hair and fairly unattractive teeth. But back to topic - You'd better post 10 soon. I want to see what happens ...

Thank you both for the reviews :) And I know the chapters are getting short; it works better for me that way, because otherwise I feel like I'm dragging it ...

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Yeah, because I have no idea what that means. But whatever, I'm tired of "talking" to you. Have fun with your oh-so-different writing. I wish you the best of luck.

Bishop- You won't be getting any more critiques from me. And "chill", as you would say, with the ridiculous "don't push people out" thing. It's you who's doing the "pushing" ...

Wow, I'm feeling a little hostility here... I don't like the way you're handling things. And, ummm, Bishop? You've been basically arguing with every single critique you've gotten. That's a ...

Thanks you guys. I'm glad you like it :) Chap. 7 is coming sometime soon. Not quite sure when as of yet...

Ash- Don't be disappointed with yourself :( You'll get that perfect beginning. Remember me telling you that I had about SIX differnt beginnings for As Black as Raven? Yeah, and ...

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