KEMPTON

is this a vampire reference? very existential, but great adjectives and flow, good poem!!

Thanks for the feedback guys. Pen, I've never really read any poetry other than band lyrics, but I will definitely check out those existentialist writers you suggested!

looks like some carefully selected words in the first few stanzas, they seem to fit just right. These lyrics make me feel a sense of progression, I could see these ...

Maybe consider the last line to be "I've seen a thousand like you." But, cool idea nonetheless.

Thanks for the review, its very helpful!

Great use of adjectives to instill the imagery! I liked how this piece started off in a very direct and vague manner, before honing in on the generalization.

Thanks for reading! Please comment & critique. Let me know if you think I should run with this idea.