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Re: Spill
Fight! fight fight fight......OK im kidding....but still im not sure what too wordy is myself but thats cause my poems are like two worded lines, and yes i agree that ...
Jun 26, 2007 -
Re: All Because of Father
Well now this poem seems liked...and i hate reviewing a poem after several people because most of it seems repetitive and unneeded so I'll cut to the chase... I liked ...
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: Time
Well this seems like a good poem....and obviously people here know how it is, and though this doesn't need to be repeated I'll do it anyway for kicks and giggles. ...
Apr 8, 2007