Juniper

:lol: well, of course, I am never in the bed at that time... or ever before 1:30. 1:30 is a stretch too... my bed time is like 3

Ari, wow! You've got me hooked on this and there's no mistakes :) i can't wait for the next part!

Oh, I see... That confused me a bit :P. I guess my brain was looking at this part as an individual not as a part of a novel :P. Silly ...

Welcome to YWS! Is this all of the poem? :)

ROFL. This is hilarious, especially since the reputation snoink and teague have (well, who knows if its reputation or whatever), you two have an awesome writing talent, so this was ...

Once again, i had no editing time :P but i wanted to get this out :D its really rubbish :D critques and comment much appreciated

I hated this was too morbid and gross.

WoW. I love it. I have no changes to suggest....awesome.

Sometimes poems that bluntly tell a story irk me, but this one interested me and kept me reading through. I dont enjoy pirates and seafaring adventures, but this I liked. ...

This almost brought tears to my me it signifies the early night that you are about to spend reveling in peace with those who bring joy to your heart. Please ...