Juniper

Sachiko! How melancholy and cute this is. So bittersweet and gentle; an overall appreciative piece. In an odd way this makes me happy... maybe it's the clementines and the peaceful ...

Snoinkarina, I enjoyed this. It had a wonderful, melancholy tone to it that carried on - as my interest did- until the end. I'm not too fond of the raising ...

Hello, Jigs! I liked this! A bit better done, better exposed than the last short piece you posted. In the beginning, you had interest, but you didn't quite have the ...

Hey Kylan, This is one of those pieces of yours that I really enjoy reading, but is near impossible to critique. :P I would recommend maintaining a narration style in ...

Good day, Conrado, I like this poem a lot. Your narrative style does well here, but I would recommend trimming any and every excess words that you can eliminate, because ...

Hi there, Mia. June here. :) I think that this is a decent effort. As with any piece of writing, it has its rough edges that could stand to go. ...

Wow, Ellie. I'm pleasantly surprised. Pretty impressed by this. This is beautiful. You do an excellent job with personification in this poem. I hate to touch structure, but I have ...

Coon, I probably shouldn't pay so much attention to judging poems based on the genre they're posted in (which, by the way, it's horribly confusing to tell where to put ...

Hello, Cheeky Monkey! Your name is so cute! Is it inspired by the dance duo? This poem is cute, as well. I read it aloud to my older sister and ...

Hey Francis! Where have you been? I wondered why you've barely been around as of late. Anyway, June here. Poetry is what you make it. I really like the prose ...

Hey Splooshie, One of the things that I like most about your writing is how easy it is to read. Some stories - especially on here - can't be read ...

Hey J, June here, I found this pretty impressive. Not only do you do an excellent first person narrative (and female one, at that) you have a pretty darn great ...

Hey Logan, June here, This is good! As far as story goes, you should know that you've got me hooked. ;) There's nothing major here to talk about. Your sentences ...

Hey Kika, June here, Of the many things I often repeat whilst reviewing poetry, I find myself most often telling people to put their poems to the test by removing ...

Hey Bookmarker, This seems like a sketch to work from. I think you should take time to expand this, because as it stands it's not entirely realitic. > The first ...