JunePearl

@SpunkyKitty Thank you! Glows & Grows (the memories). Part of my inspiration for the Lemony Snicket feel was Lemony Snicket, so you were correct! I hadn't thought of the outfit, ...

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Nice job. It's great how you can hear the story in the song. It definitely sounds like a rap song, and has a great flow. It really is like a ...

I see. And you should be proud if that's worst thing I could find

Thank you very much! I am very glad you like this version more. I am aware that some of it doesn't make a ton of sense, but considering this is ...

Thank you very much. Yeah, I figured it made much nore sense, and I was trying to make it is realistic as possible.

For some reason I can't use the number eight and it just turns into an emoji face

Oh okay, and yes it did clear it up. Thank you

Thanks for the feedback, and I'm happy that you like the new version

Thank you very much, and I do remember you. I'm glad you like the updated version. And, I was going to explain why the kidnapped children cooperated in the next ...

Wow, thank you very much.

Okay, thank you for letting me know

Thank you very much spacekitty

Thank you for reading, and for helping me with my plentiful amount of grammatical errors

Also, thank you!

Thank you, and I definitely use the save the cat method. It seems like a great idea