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JuneIparis

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: What did we do Wrong ~ A Bullying Awareness Poem

    hey, dogsrule5, your poem is absolutely , hands down, THE most amazing poem i've read! it touched my heart, and will surly touch many others'. it almost brought tears to ...

    Nov 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Prologue and Prophecy

    Thank you for the sweet review! I do agree on changing up the info dump in the prologue into a scene. its just that there are so many time gaps, ...

    Nov 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Prologue and Prophecy

    Thanks for the review! everything you've said can and will be taken into consideration. I'm a fairly new writer, and I really appreciate all the constructive critisism and positive vibes ...

    Nov 13, 2016


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