Julri

Wow. That was... wow. Well written, descriptive, thought provoking. Just... wow. Okay, that made no sense. But, the point I'm trying to get across was that it was really, really, ...

Wow. This totally sounds like something I would have written. In fact, I'm considering stealing your idea and selling it for millions. Whoa... Anyways, I can't put the awesomeness of ...

Normally I don't really like haikus, but your's were great! Especially the first one, because of the words you picked and, well, just everything. If you have more, you should ...

The idea's been done before, but if it's well written it could work. Just make sure to give your characters a lot of personality and to make sure the plot ...

It was pretty good, but there were a couple of problems. It could use some dialouge to make it run a little bit better and you don't get much of ...

I really, really, really liked this! I love how you went through so many details of her day and how everything was sort of vague, but the point is still ...