Juliet21

Hey, thank you for your feedback. I will definitely try to include more about the characters in the next parts, but either way, I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'll ...

Hey there, I am so glad to hear you found my review useful. I'd really like to read your other book, thanks, send the link when you are ready :)

Hi there, thank you for your review! I will take your comments on board and edit my work. Thank you for taking the time to look at it :)

No don't worry, I edited for clarity, your eyes are fine :)

Hi there, thank you so much for your feedback! I think why the last paragraph might have felt rushed or incomplete is because this is only the first chapter of ...

Any feedback is welcomed and appreciated :)

Hi thank you for reading!