JujuMayuDreamer14

I really like your poem sometimes we all come to feel that way of feeling fear, a very nice job. It sorta didn't make sense you knew but we would ...

This Poem very nice may I add, but a couple suggestions my dear you express but try to express a little more by telling the reader what they should know, ...

I would say that this poem is okay but there is potential the poem was great but it could be better putting in the tought. I like the idea which ...

Story is okay but you have to think of the rational things and if it makes sense well a sotry doesnt have to make sense but a good story has ...