Juciebox

What the heck. I am shocked that his parents would do that. I know its fake, but those parents desirve to die. I'm glad that this is a flash back ...

I like how you started with a flashback, it sets the mood and lets us know who the MC is. Plus, when you went to when they found her, it ...

OMG I love how you started the entire thing. I don't critique, I am more of a author/reviewer. I take all the stuff I know about authors and my intense ...

No one ever has to go through this shit at 10! I'm ten years old and already I'm heartless, soulless, loveless! My parents are dead and I'm a orphan. Yes, ...

What the heck is soo bad that made you write this. It sounds like your trying to keep people from comiting suicide, but at the same time, it sounds like ...

wow, just wow. I think this is one of those stories were randomness actually works. Though there is a lot of space. Maybe if you filled in some space. When ...

Wow, I loved it. It made me think about what are life means and what we are meant to do. In the long, run, that is what books are supposed ...