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Re: Behind the Silken Curtain: Chapter 1
Amazing! I love the imagery and emotion. I actually feel as if I'm experiencing it. I don't have much in the way of suggestions, only one. I understand that the ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Narthegal's Greed - Ch.1 The Boy in the Mud
I can't wait for Chapter 2! I instantly connected with the characters and was able to see the scene play out behind my eyes. I was wondering . . . ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: The Trip Up To the Attic
Wonderful imagery! I could really see the scene unfold. A few suggestions: I couldn't quite find the theme of the story. Are Eddie and Cindy mourning for Eddie's grandmother, or ...
Mar 28, 2015