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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Music and Faeires

    I LOVED THIS!!! The only two things I think could be fixed are as follows: 1. When she thinks to herself, you wrote with quotations, which made me think she ...

    Jan 4, 2020
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Surviving The Darkness

    Okay, so this was great. Putting that out there first, just in case you read this, it was an amazing story. I feel like this was a little rushed. This ...

    Jan 4, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Little Red Riding Hood

    Oh wow. That ending was unexpected. I kinda wish you had explained the curse more fully, although I got the drift. This reminded me of Once Upon A Time's version ...

    Dec 28, 2019
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Other Re: The voice of the leaves.

    AWWWW!!! This story tugs at heartstrings. I was NOT prepared. Aw, now I'm crying. Thank you so much for this story! I'm thankful I got to read it. When I ...

    Dec 28, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: [DELETED]​

    I didn't look, but did/are you going to post more to this story? I would love a chance to read more. This story caught my eye, and I must say... ...

    Dec 28, 2019
  • Short Story » Literature, Lyrical Re: To the monster under my bed

    Okay, that left me with chills! I was sitting in the dark, but halfway through I had to go turn on the lights. I thank my lucky stars that I ...

    Dec 28, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Sizable Green Gem

    That's life for you. Existential crisis and drama, but that exam is the first thing on your mind! This was really well-written! I don't know if this means much from ...

    Dec 28, 2019


You know how hard it is to feel like an extreme falcon-headed combat machine when somebody calls you "chicken man"?
— Rick Riordan, The Red Pyramid