JosephHazel2

It's time for a review! Overall, I enjoyed the originality and creativity of the piece, along with the guts to take such a well-known story and give it your own ...

Yo dog. There were a lot of ellipses in here, mostly in the beginning. While ellipses can add suspense when they're used in bulk they kind of lose their shine. ...

J here for a review! I think I understand what's going on, and it was really clear throughout. Very nice writing, really only two critiques from me. "Now the weapon ...