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Re: Mistakes
Thank you very much, your feedback was so helpful, to be honest i don't even know why he's in the situation he's in. The story our class had to base ...
May 1, 2015 -
Re: Distance between two worlds when we used to be one
this is good, but there does feel like there is something missing, i'm not very good at reviewing poetry, but it was good
Apr 30, 2015