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Re: Dad (part 1)
First off: Pretty cool story. I liked how readers could see the life progression Sammie. An example that was very nice, was the first diary entry, where she is just ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: The Girl Who Broke Free
Hey there! I found this read very interesting. Although dark setting aren't really my cup of tea, I found this fun to read. Stories flowed nicely together, except for the ...
Nov 3, 2015 -
Re: Mountain's Promise -- Chapter 1
Hey there! I have to say, very interesting concept, and I like where this is going. Anyways, let's begin with reviewing. Your grammar, and spelling are pretty good, nothing too ...
Nov 2, 2015 -
Re: The Fourth 'S'
Wow! That was really good! I felt very captivated while reading the story. You kept a very nice pace in your story, and I'm very impressed! There's not really anything ...
Nov 2, 2015 -
Re: The Perfect Storm
Hey there! To begin, I have to say you are really good writer. This piece was pretty well written, and I enjoyed it (not to sound weird). The detail was ...
Nov 2, 2015